Сама сочинила. Оцените пожалуйста

link 16.03.2007 11:38

Subject: Сама сочинила. Оцените пожалуйста

I am thinking of you
As I am alone without you
Just only have sweet memories of you
No wish anything to do
Besides a wish to see you
From the beginning I knew
That it was wrong to love you
But when I fall in love
So difficult it was
To withstand temptation of love
And now I know what true love is
And even know the cost of it
This love granted me with three happy nights
That knocked the bottom of my life
And left a piece of holiday in my heart
That I felt in that long hot summer night
I want so much to be blessed
And have in my life only the best
I tried all cures, but nothing helps
Because, for me you are the BEST!
And nobody is able to replace
Cause only you are the BEST!
OK my Dear, Let’s SMILE
Believe me, everything is fine
You might have guessed
That it was just a pretext
To write a letter to you
So amazing but nothing comes to mind
When I consider you as a friend of mine
Unbelievable!I don’t know even what to write.
May be it is better and right
Rather that to write
That I dream to have one more unforgettable night.

Быстров ✉

link 16.03.2007 11:59

Просто и замечательно. Я себе скопировал в папочку. Спасибо за красивое творчество.

tats ✉

link 16.03.2007 12:58

Велик могучим английского языка...

Translucid Mushroom ✉

link 16.03.2007 13:02

Почитайте Шелли или Китса.

Сравните.

(((:

gel ✉