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 ala_Julia

link 12.12.2006 10:14 
Subject: лингвостилистический анализ текста! ling.
Проверьте, пожалуйста , правильно ли я нашла стилистические приемы:1. I have always been convinced that if a woman once made up her mind to marry a man nothing but instant flight could save him. Not always that; for once a friend of mine, seeing the inevitable loom menacingly before him - inevitable loom menacingly - hyperbola.
2. "She's had a rotten time, poor dear. I feel so dreadfully sorry for her." - Poor dear- metaphor.
3. I behaved like an angel, but I confess that I thought if the tears were going to well up into anybody's eyes they should have been mine rather than hers. -I confess that I thought - anaphora repetition.
4.I could not but think that I and not she should have worn a pathetic expression when next we met- worn a pathetic expression - trite metaphor!
5. . It could hardly have been that he grew tired of her conversation, for she had never had any conversation- epiphora.
6. He was as ever assiduous and gallant- simile.

 суслик

link 12.12.2006 10:21 
во втором rotten time - как минимум эпитет, мне кажется...

 willy_wilkinson

link 12.12.2006 18:00 
i confess that i thought - no anaphorical repetition

assiduous and gallant - epithets as well

 Dimking

link 12.12.2006 18:16 
2. эпитет прям в глаза бросается.
3. если присмотреться, то увидите simile. анафорой там не пахнет.
4. Вкусовщина. pathetic здесь не имеет окраски. слово употреблено в первичном и прямом значении.

Скучноватые примерчики, извините...

 Dimking

link 12.12.2006 18:20 
hyperbola в стилистике при моей памяти писалась с буквой "е" на конце.
и почему анализ ЛИНГВОстилистический? Голимая стилистика и больше ничего. Лингвистический анализ делать не на чем - плоский текст. (*.txt)
:)

 ala_Julia

link 13.12.2006 8:37 
Dimking.
simile я нашла- behaved like an angel.
Можно сказать, что это не лингвостил. анализ текста, но он напичкан различными стил. приемама.
Пытаюсь найти те, которые я еще не нашла!

 ala_Julia

link 13.12.2006 9:35 
Эти правильно я определила!
the gift of pathos - trite metophor!
the world was too much for her- мне не понятно!
a good deal of money- metophor!
He took her here, there, and everywhere - ?
he fell out of love- trite metophor!
...

 

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