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Subject: Грамматика и стиль абзаца: что скажете? Люди добрые, проверьте, пожалуйста, на предмет грамматики и насколько текст английский. Спасибо!We are committed to provide the best support to our customers. The CompanyX Team recognizes that our work doesn't stop when you purchase one of our products. We want you to have a great experience using our products. That’s why we have worked out the support strategy, which keeps you in touch with us from the moment you purchase the software till you start collecting your profit from using it. Free 90-day Product Support During 90 days from the moment you purchase the product, we provide the following services: - FREE installation The main reason of free support is simple: we want you to start returning your investment in the shortest time possible. Our assistance will save your time, money, and effort. Free Product Upgrades If yes, we will update the minor product version you have for free. In this way we thank you for being our valued customer. |
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link 28.04.2006 10:52 |
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minor -> inferior и пр. |
| Спасибо, Анатолий Д! А что есть и пр. ? |
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Just a couple of quick things: words in caps are my suggestions. Words in should be taken out, imho. When a new feature is added to the product, we send out a newsletter to you, so [*that*] you can decide if you need it on your website. If YOU DECIDE YOU NEED THE FEATURE, we will update the minor product version you have for free. IT IS OUR WAY OF SAYING "THANK YOU FOR BEING OUR CUSTOMER." |
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link 28.04.2006 17:56 |
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We are committed to providing the best support to our customers. The CompanyX team believes that our efforts do not stop when you purchase one of our products. We want to let you have great experience as a user of our product. To that end, we have developed a support strategy to make sure we stay in touch with you from the time when you buy our software until its use begins to yield earnings for you. Free 90-day Product Support During 90 days upon your purchase of our product, we provide the following services: - FREE installation The main objective of our free support service is simple: we want to assure adequate return on investment for you as fast as possible. Our assistance will save you time, money, and effort. Free Product Upgrades If this is the case, we will upgrade your existing version of the product for free. This is our way to say thank you for being our appreciated customer. |
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