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Subject: Помогите перефразировать красиво Красиво сформулированные предложения. Ну никак не могу сказать другими словами, а копирайт не позволяет оставить эту фразу.Помогите, пожалуйста, перефразировать ее. Может кому тоже такая формулировка пригодится, уж больно она вежливая. XXX Ltd. prides itself on selling only quality equipment. We know that because you may not be able to inspect the equipment personally prior to purchase, that you put a great deal of faith in us to make sure that what we tell you about the item and it's condition will be true. Заранее благодарна за любую ценную мысль. |
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XXX Ltd. prides itself on selling only quality equipment. We know that when you are not able to inspect the equipment prior to purchase personally, you put a great deal of faith in us to make sure that information about the item and it's condition is reliable. Manufacturer's spec sheets on equipment are provided when available. Normally manuals are not included, but they may be provided - whenever available - for $.. per copy. XXX ltd. does not issue refunds for Used Equipment. Used Equipment cannot be returned when it does not meet the buyer's needs. It means that if you buy a piece of equipment to perform a task that may not be it’s original purpose, we would not be able to replace the item. Used items cannot be returned if they don't meet local Country or City Inspector Guidelines. Before making your choice (purchase) we urge you to ask as many questions as you feel needed. |
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2Al Все-таки хотелось бы видеть этот пассаж на языке оригинала. |
| Вдогонку. Я имею в виду то, что второе предложение нужно перестроить, так как в таком виде реклама звучит навязчиво, в частности, ИМХО, надо убрать we know.. и заменить may на might. Общее впечатление - очень помпезно. |
| вообще как то сухо переведено, нет вежливости. надо сверить с оригиналом и при необходимости переделать оригинал тоже я считаю |
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Вообще-то это и есть оригинал, "взят" взаймы у американского поставщика б/у оборудования, кусочек гарантийного талона. Все еще надеюсь на вашу помощь... |
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люблю письма делового стиля. :-)) XXX Ltd. is proud of its achievements in selling only quality equipment. We are glad to see your trust in us relying on our quality and advanced equipment that you are about to purchase not even having opportunity to inspect it. Manufacturer’s MSDS sheet on equipment is available upon requirement. Manuals are not normally included, but can be purchased at Customer’s wish for $.. per copy. XXX ltd. Do not reimburse Customer for used equipment. Rules identified by Supplier do not specify return of equipment by Customer should the equipment purchased be not for its original use. This means that in case Customer buys a piece of equipment und uses it not for assigned purpose we will not be able to replace the item with another one. Used items cannot not be returned as they do not meet local Country or City Inspector Guidelines. Therefore, we kindly ask you to clarify all issues in regard to information submitted prior to finally purchasing the equipment mentioned. |
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