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link 25.11.2005 7:25 |
Subject: brains, dont look, you will kill me :) OK,here is the deal. people already helped with this... people then complained (here on my end to think of some other way to say it all)does this work? originally, i liked what brains suggested, but they complained it was too long or something .... so i tried to use his hints and make it all work in a way they can accept. does it look ok? THANK YOU! ORIGINAL: MINE: |
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link 25.11.2005 7:42 |
1. "к которым Батуча имеет интерес" - "has an interest in them" in Russian 'интерес к чему-л.' means that one wants to know more about something or to deal with something. In English it may also mean one participates in the business, or holds a share in equity. Please consider what meaning is appropriate here. 2. "managed thereby, despite its affiliation thereto, as aforesaid" seems to have been omitted in the translation. 3. "извещение об инвестировании" - "investment advice" 4. "для преференциальных намерений" |
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link 25.11.2005 7:45 |
Анатолий Д keen advice - thank you! as for # 4 - do you have any suggestions? once i looked at, i understood why you said russians wont get it - it seems to be in english :) |
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link 25.11.2005 7:55 |
Анатолий Д professionalnix meri???? |
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link 25.11.2005 7:56 |
if they mean the horrorful Batucha may try to use its advice as a way to obtain some benefits for itself, it may be "или с намерением обеспечить для себя преимущества." always subject to lawyers' approval. |
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link 25.11.2005 8:02 |
Анатолий Д ...при условии, что эти рекоммендации не стимулированы интересом Батуча к этим компаниям а также, по профессиональной причине а не личной. what about this? |
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link 25.11.2005 8:06 |
I dont like it because it is not clear whose personal reasons may be involved. Moreover, trying to secure unlawful privileges for one's business may be considered as a professional concern rather that private. It misses the point, in my opinion. |
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link 25.11.2005 8:08 |
yeah, i think you might be right thanks anatoli!! |
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