Строчка из договора

link 12.01.2018 11:56

Subject: Строчка из договора gen.

В переводе нужно употребить "shall prepay the 30% of the Goods..." или "shall pay the 30% advance payment from the Goods value..."?
Мне по смыслу подходит второе, но не звучит. Как лучше?

Исходник
Покупатель осуществляет предоплату в размере 30% от стоимости Товара на счет Продавца на основании данного Контракта, что составляет 4 380 USD.

Перевод
Under this Contract the Buyer shall prepay the 30% of the Goods value to the Seller’s account, the amount is 4 380 USD.

grachik ✉

link 12.01.2018 12:29

Under the Contract (= Hereunder) the Buyer shall prepay 30% of the Goods cost, that is equal to USD 4 380, to the Seller’s account.

jackiesback ✉

link 12.01.2018 14:27

hi there

which amounts to
the 30% of... is unnatural here (sounds like "эти 30%" in Russian). Remove the article.
'Under this Contract' used at the beginning requires a comma.
That's hardly equivalent to "на основании", but I don't quite understand what the author meant by this phrase in this context. So no comments.
As regards "cost": not cost, but price. The price of the Goods or the Goods' price.

terrik111 ✉

link 12.01.2018 14:29

понял

Alex16 ✉

link 12.01.2018 14:42

А если так (c учетом комментариев Jackiesback):

Pursuant to this Contract, the Buyer shall prepay 30% of the price of the Goods by transferring US$4,380 to the Seller’s account...

johnstephenson ✉

link 12.01.2018 14:47

jackiesback +1

'shall make an advance payment of 30% of the price of the Goods'

jackiesback ✉

link 12.01.2018 14:49

To Alex16
This sounds perfect in terms of language, but "which amounts to..." is indispensable here--it must be said.

Alex16 ✉

link 12.01.2018 15:18

OK, thanks.

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