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Одно из заданий:
People have become too independent on technology.

Образец (Macmillan):
These days, people use technology to do many things.
They use computers at work, mobile phones for
communication, and television to watch programmes.
These devices are useful, but have people become too
dependent on them?

In my opinion, people spend too much time using these
devices, and in fact, they use them more than they use
their minds. For example, people often use a calculator
just to do simple maths, but it’s something they could
do in their head. Another example is the Internet.
People spend so much time on it, their social life begins
to suffer. They have substituted Facebook for a real
social life.

On the other hand, I would agree that some things can
only be done with a device. Most of the work carried
out in offices is done by computers. If we returned
to the old ways of doing things, business would slow
down. Also, mobile phones make it much easier to
keep in touch with other people, especially when we’re
away from home.

Despite those advantages, I believe people have become
too dependent on technology. Their minds have become
weaker as a result, and without technology, they will
find things harder. There are also physical concerns
with using technology too much, such as having pains
in your wrist or putting strain on your eyes.

In conclusion, while I think technology is useful, people
have to be careful that they don’t use it too much. They
will begin to forget that there are some things they can
and should do themselves.

Объем высказывания.
Стилевое оформление (соблюдается нейтральный стиль).