Subject: Просмотрите, пожалуйста, cover letter, на наличие грубых ошибок... заранее ОГРОМНОЕ спасибо! Dear Kristina:I have been informed of a job opportunity as Native Russian Speaking Teacher in H. I am a very interested in such a position because I am a philologist and a teacher of Russian language on speciality. I have an experience of teaching in the private school, the college of additional education and the average school. Мy young man and me have recently successfully received a higher education in Moscow and we are going to move in H for work on speciality. I am currently employed as office manager in Moscow so I am familiar with business lexicon and principles. I believe my background and experience will allow me to teach Business Russian efficiently and be an asset to your company in a very short time. I look forward to further discuss this job opportunity and how I can contribute to the success of E. Sincerely, Irina B И еще отрывок из резюме: Еще раз спасибо!!! |
какой у вас уровень английского указан в резюме ? - серьезно, от этого и зависит содержание вашего письма. |
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link 22.10.2007 11:01 |
Особенно выдающиеся ляпы: Мy young man and me (my boyfriend and I) I can awake interest of coming people (предлагаю так: I can awake interest of people who have come, а это очень непросто, уверяю вас...) |
I am a very interested - I am interested .... very much average school - скорее всего secondary comprehensive school все-таки не говоря уже об недостающих артиклях кое-где |
важен уровень - если - basic - то, нужно серьезно корректировать! |
да, у нее basic написано... какие предложения еще посоветуете переписать? и где ошибки с артиклями? |
I have an experience of - I am experienced in teacher of Russian language on speciality - and my speciality is Russian Linguistics. we are going to move in H for work on speciality - we plan to move to H and work there by background. I am currently employed as office manager in Moscow so I am familiar with business lexicon and principles - I am an Office Manager at the Moscow company. Therefore I know bunsiness language well and business theory. I believe my background and experience will allow me to teach Business Russian efficiently and be an asset to your company in a very short time. |
спасибо большое, очень помогли!!! |
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link 22.10.2007 12:22 |
My young man = My boyfriend |
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link 22.10.2007 12:24 |
and my speciality is Russian Linguistics - не прокатит, только major, из того что еще нашел ни в коем случае не office manager- просто не поймут, нужно писать administrative assistant |
ух ты :-)) а что такое "the average school"? |
office manager - поймут - сами так называют - только major - почему? |
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link 22.10.2007 12:36 |
I have been informed of a job opportunity as Native Russian Speaking Teacher at H. I am very interested in such a position because I am a philologist and a teacher of Russian language. I tought at a private school, a college and a secondary [public] school. Recently, my boyfriend and I have graduated from a university in Moscow, and we are going to move to H in order to get jobs. I am currently employed as an office manager in Moscow and I am familiar with business vocabulary and principles. I believe my background and experience will allow me to teach Business Russian efficiently [???and become an asset for your company very shortly?????]. I look forward to further discussing this job opportunity and the ways that I can contribute to the success of E. Sincerely, |
отрывок из резюме весь надо менять. особенно шедевр (аскер прости) - After my lessons learners begin to understand subject on a deeper level. |
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link 22.10.2007 12:42 |
Dear Ms. X (не просто по имени, но по фамилии) Further to your advertisement for a vacancy of a Native Russian Speaking Teacher in H., please find attached my CV//resume. I am very interested in the posision, as I hold a degree in Russian from a Moscow [название института полностью приведите, пожалуйста] and I am a fully qualified teacher of Russian. My teaching experience includes a private school, a college of further education and a secondary/state/public/independent school. My present employment enabled me to familiarise myself with the business principles, code, and ethics, as well as to acquire an extensive business vocabulary. I believe my background and experience make me an efficient teacher of Russian for Business course and I can become a great asset to your company. Thank you for your consideration. Should you find my CV of interest, please do not hesitate to contact me at the time of your convenience for any further discussions. Yours sincerely I have a solid experience in teaching and training courses. I communicate with people easily and quickly estabish rapport with my students. I like to teach and consider my teaching career of utmost importance. My goal is to make students interested in the subject and to develop their better understanding of the subject through application of modern teaching methods and techniques. Or smth like that. :-) |
Да, так звучит намного лучше, спасибо! А может быть тогда и резюме посмотрите заодно? Curriculum Vitae Irina V. Beglova OBJECTIVE TECHOSNASTKA April 2007 - Present ISKRA July 2005 – August 2005, July 2006 – August 2006 Moscow State Regional University September 2002 – June 2007 |
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link 22.10.2007 13:18 |
Блюдечко с голубой каемочкой? ... В виде промта? average school indeed. Departure of Russian Filology - еще как. Чем народ здесь развлекать, посмотрели бы в необъятном гугле примеры нормальных англоязычных резюме по Вашей специальности или по специальности английский язык как иностранный, например ... Русский язык Вы как иностранный собираетесь преподавать? Ну-ну. |
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link 22.10.2007 13:23 |
have an active living position - ух ты))) |
Это просто какой-то пятничный ОФФ. Даром что в понедельник и с просьбой о помощи! :))))) |
Да чего вы так взъелись-то, я же не себе резюме готовлю... а резюме изучал преподавателей. Спасибо всем за советы. Извините, что отнял время... |
Dear Kristina: For your advertised position of Native Russian Speaking Teacher, I can offer ____ years of experience teaching in a private school and in college. I earned my teaching degree from ____________ in Moscow. My current job as an office manager has given me valuable experience in business administration and helped me polish my business-specific vocabulary in both Russian and English. I believe that my education and hands-on experience will be a substantial asset to your school. Please call me at (495) 123-4567 to discuss how I could better put my education, experience, and skills to work for your school. Sincerely, * Some additional points: - The purpose of a cover letter is not to give all information about you thus eliminating the interview. Its purpose is to wet the employer's appetite and make him or her want to talk to your in person (interview). So, every sentence in your cover letter needs to focus on your quantifiable experience, not that much on your interests or desires, or plans for the future. - I gave a sample letter above. It is by no means perfect, but I hope it is a good start. It also illustrates the two points I am making above. If you have questions, feel free to write me at mjs801@gmail.com. I can send you some resume and cover letter samples, if you are interested. |
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link 23.10.2007 5:48 |
teacher of Russian language on speciality - and my speciality is Russian Linguistics. это две разные специальности: 1) преподаватель (учитель) русского языка и 2) лингвистика |
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