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link 12.09.2006 12:21 |
Subject: Народ, тэйк э лук, пли-из! С благодарностию приму гнилые помидоры! Вот для брательника аппликацию перевела.. Dear Mr. Weiss,As I concluded from your Game Market Overview (very interesting and educative indeed!), there might be Internship job openings at Enchanted Studios. I believe that I shall meet your requirements very well. I have 2 years of experience in game development and currently am working for “Arise” (one of the local leaders in game development) as game designer and scripter in party-based RPG project. [ http://nvdd.ru/?action=screenshots&all=yes] In October my postgraduate study at Hochburg University of Applied Sciences begins, so it will be possible for me to join your team. I’m quite sure that vocational job at Enchanted Studios will be the best application of my experience, practical skills, dexterity and knowledge. What can I offer Enchanted Studios? Resourceful young man of active nature, advanced erudition, great interest in subject field, burning with the desire to achieve success in job. My basic brain firmware specifications are as follows: - understanding of what makes games attractive; - penetrating analytical mind capable of formalizing and decomposing Game vitality; - ability to develop and maintain basic gameplay idea; - creativity; - ability to head prototyping; - work experience in the industry ; - С++, Lua-script skills; - Mathematical basis; - higher engineering education. My shield is mottoed with a bearing: “I know where to get the ideas from. Even when there are no ideas”. “I know what to do with doable ideas, what to do with undoable and how to transform the latter into the former.” Thank you for your assistance. I look forward to additional information. Please, take a look at my CV and a short course of my game development life (enclosed). NN [a brief history of my shaping as a Game Development Movement activist] At the age of about 7 I spent hours in front of shop windows with inaccessible fairy devices, which were staring at me with matte black depths of their displays. I imagined what amazing phantoms I could call into being, what strange dreams I could conjure and infix into minds with the help of those magical machines — Computers. It became the starting point of my Actual life. Right away I made movements along the chosen direction: played a lot, in attempts to find «philosophers' stone» of captivating gameplay, experimented homegrown game development, attended stage and director courses of Belarusian Art Academy (I quit because it was too primitive and out-of-date), made videos, -- but treated all these activities as nothing but amusement, a Game. Meanwhile I was in earnest studying programming and working as a programmer, studying systemotechnics, mastering my profession... Nevertheless, little by little I was drifting in multimedia direction. After all, industrial process control systems (SCADA systems), which I was making during University study, isn’t it a sort of tycoon-style simulator? Logical result of this evolution was my working upon post-apocalyptic real time strategy and then upon party based RPG at «Arise» (one of the local leaders in game development), where I could try, to my delight, several different occupations and take care of all aspects of the Game. “Desert Law” RTS http://www.strategyinformer.com/pc/desertlaw/interview.html “Not the time for dragons" RPG http://www.crpg.ru/sections.php?op=viewarticle&artid=2079 Now the time is right to proceed forward with my creative development, and here you are: I am a student of the Master's Degree Program at Hochburg University of Applied Sciences. And now I apply for an internship with unwavering purpose to become a useful member of Enchanted team. |
Ой,жалко мне Вас! :(( Не теряйте тут зря время... Даже если гнилые помидоры и не посыпятся,ответы вряд ли будут. Помогать мало кто хочет и может. А вот косточки сейчас обмоют! :))) |
Если тут и надо что поправить, то в деталях. Мой английский не настолько хорош, чтобы я был в состоянии править в туда. Но оценить в общем я вполне в состоянии. Т в этом смысле текст производит отличное впечатление во всех отношениях. И по стилю, и по соответствию поставленной задаче. В общем, читается не без удовольствия, а потому вполне конкурентоспособен. |
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link 12.09.2006 13:54 |
Согласен с Брейнсом, вполне адекватно, читать приятно ((: |
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link 12.09.2006 13:56 |
Уа-а-а???!!! Чессно гря, ну НИКАК такой оценки не ожидалось! Тем более от Вас, ведь я хоть веду себя тихо, но тусить тут у вас мне очень нравится, и всех завсегдатаев как бы трошки знаю. Очень приятно, ведь всего образия -- спецшкола... |
Автору: а что Ваш ник означает, если не секрет? Что-то похожее на "своюяичницу" :) но язык чуть не сломал. Вроде бы украинский... или белорусский... am I right? |
Aiduza, не имеет морального права на такие вопросы... :-0))) |
PLEASE LOOK CLOSELY. I HAVE MADE A NUMBER OF EDITING CHANGES FOR YOU Dear Mr. Weiss, I believe that I would meet, very well, your requirements. I have 2 years of experience in game development and am currently working for “Arise” (a local leaders in game development) as Game Designer and Scripter in a party-based RPG project. [ http://nvdd.ru/?action=screenshots&all=yes] In October my postgraduate study at Hochburg University of Applied Sciences begins, so it will be possible for me to join your team. I’m quite sure that a vocational job at Enchanted Studios will be the best application of my experience, practical skills, dexterity and knowledge. What can I offer Enchanted Studios? Now the time is right for me to move forward with my creative development, studying for my Master’s Degree at Hochburg University of Applied Sciences. Applying for an internship with you, I have an unwavering purpose to become a useful member of the Enchanted team. Mt | Google GOOD LUCK! |
2 СуайчынЬнiцаОчень приятно, ведь всего образия -- спецшкола...Видать, в Вашей спецшколе случилась парочка действительно хороших преподавателей, и один из них вёл язык. Ну, и от учеников обычно тоже кое-что зависит. |
2 СуайчынЬнiца "случилась парочка действительно хороших преподавателей" Обратите внимание на грамотность и стиль - "случилась". No comments! |
Nina, you were supposed to be in bed now... so don't waste your precious time. Want some tea? :) |
i'm not done with the translation |
aiduza and now i am also stuck looking for an interpreter |
Ой, Deserad, Вы, оказываицца, не токмо про грамотность, но и про стиль слыхали? Ржунимагу. Жесток он, этот английский форум, и тамбовский волк безжалостным его обитателям товарисч. ;-) |
Nina, make them read the "Workplace Safety and Health Guidelines" and go home NOW! |
Ой, Brains, канэшна! :)) и даже про многгозначность слов слыхал, представляете! :))) - а Вы "токмо" про грамотность?:)) |
aiduza you're funny |
Ну и как он, этот интерпретёр, ищется? :) |
Аристарх still looking |
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link 12.09.2006 15:08 |
О-ёй-ёй! ОГРОМНОЕ спасибо за внимание и за ВСЕ отклики! (Но это вовсе не к тому, чтобы закрыть обсуждение!) Кто не желает пачкаться об гнилые помидоры, смело берите в руки ТУХЛЫЕ ЯЙЦА! (Я в папином, провонявшем рыбой, ОЗК!) Айдузе: Процитирую себя со ста-а-рой ветки. А Ь -- им козыряют здесь особо "самосЬвядомые" интеллигенты (которые, натурально, в шляпах.) |
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