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Subject: Пожалуйста, проверьте отрывочек. Спасибо. IT В силу своего грамматического кретинизма, я не уверена, что правильно составила следующий отрывок текста. Этот текст будет размещен на странце "Купить". Если кто-то что-то узреет, буду очень благодарна. Заранее спасибо.######################################################################### Thank you for your interest in purchasing our products! We accept credit card payments via ShareIT online system, money order or wire transfer. We offer 10% cash discount for payments made via money order (Western Union), and 5% for bank wire transfer payments. If you wish to make payment via money order or wire transfer, please contact us to get the bank details. We know how difficult the decision of purchasing the software can be. If you still have questions, doubts or need some information to take the decision, contact us. We will be glad to assist. ######################################################################### |
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Nothing wrong - just nitpicking :-) Suggestions, not corrections. 1st sent. ...via/[consider: through] Share IT .... 2nd sent. ... payments [drop: made via] by money order 3rd sent. ... payment [drop: via]by money order 4th sent. ... We know it's difficult to choose the right software. Should you have any questions, are in doubt or need some information to make up your mind/make your choice, please contact us. We will be glad/happy to assist. |
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Oh yes, and Thank you for your interest in [drop: purchasing] our products! |
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думаю, артикль не нужен, или требовалось подчеркнуть, что именно на ваш софт трудно решиться? :) purchasing the software - consider "purchasing software" |
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2Althea - спасибо, понято :) 2torq - упс, некомильфо. Артикль убрала. Спасибо. |
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A FEW POINTS: Thank you for your interest in (PURCHASING NOT NEEDED IF IT'S ON THE KYPIT' PAGE) our products! We offer A 10% cash discount for payments made BY money order (Western Union), and A 5% DISCOUNT for bank wire transfers (PAYMENTS NOT NEEDED HERE). FOR MAKING PAYMENTS WITH MONEY ORDERS OR WIRE TRANSFERS, please contact us FOR bank details. We know how difficult the decision of purchasing (NO ARTICLE HERE)software can be. If you still have questions, doubts or YOU JUST need some information to HELP YOU MAKE the decision, PLEASE contact us. We will be glad to assist YOU. |
| Nina79, благодарю. Я кстати, и сомневалась в целесообразности употребления "payments" после "tranfer". |
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Thank you for your interest in our products! We accept credit card payments via the ShareIT online system, money order, or wire transfer. We offer 10% cash discount for payments by money order (Western Union) and 5% for bank wire transfer payments. If you wish to make payment via money order or wire transfer, please contact us FOR bank details. We know it is difficult to make the right choice of software. Do not hesitate to / please contact us if you have any questions or need some information. We are happy to help/assist. |
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nastique не за что .... рада помочь |
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