Subject: Апельсины :( Ребят, проверьте, пожалуйста, общую правильность письма, и, если можно добавьте пару-тройку вопросов. Задание - письмо предполагаемому поставщику апельсинов, цель задать побольше вопросов (бред, конечно, это все контрактом оговаривается, но задание есть задание):Dear Mr. Robinson, We, Cherry Orchard Ltd., are one of the leading importers and distributor of fresh fruits and vegetables in Republic of Belarus, and are in the business since 1992. We wish to establish a fruitful and long-term business relationship with your esteemed company. At the moment we are interested for a large lot of oranges. Before concluding a treaty, we need some help with the following questions: 1. Is the country of origin Morocco or Spain? Thank you for your time, and I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Commercial manager Спасибо всем откликнувшимся и простите все, кого отвлек от более серьезных дел! |
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link 27.11.2005 9:27 |
distributorS in the Republic ...and we are in... ...moment, we... ...interested in... lot->consignment treaty->contract/agreement Is the product quality grade high... ...was any technology used... demand of -> request terms of payment May any discounts apply? Is delivery included in the contract? What delivery terms does your company use/practice with... to hearing... Sincerely, Manager... |
IMHO 3... any machines used for it? |
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link 27.11.2005 10:03 |
1. 'machines/equipment' is better 2. Regarding the number of questions, consider the issue of phytosanitary certificates and other shipping documents. |
Dear Mr. Robinson, Our company, Cherry Orchard Ltd., is one of the leading importers and distributors of fresh fruit and vegetables in the Republic of Belarus. We have been in the business since 1992. We would like to establish a productive and long-term business relationship with your (well-respected, а еще лучше, убрать совсем) company. At the moment we are interested in a large quantity of oranges. Before considering an agreement, we need to clarify the following issues: 1..Is the product’s country of origin Morocco or Spain? Thank you in advance for your prompt attention to this request. We look forward to hear from you soon. Sincerely, |
Sorry, but the word combination "fruitful relationships" in this context sounds pretty funny:)) |
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