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 Alyoum

link 22.05.2017 7:17 
Subject: Помогите, пожалуйста, проверить аннотацию на ошибки for.pol.
The article deals with to the foreign policy relations between the EU and the USA and considers issues concerning the history of the development of the EU's foreign policy in the 21st century with the active intervention of the USA, the processes connected with formation of transatlantic community, the NATO factor and influence of the alliance policy on the activities of the European Union.
Currently the transformation of the system of international relations, increase of the contradictions connected with redistribution of global potential and balance of forces in the world political arena are continue. The United States of America is the major political, military and economic partner of the European Union. Atlantic relations with their intensive political, economic, military, scientific and cultural ties, in terms of their volume remain the largest in the world. But now the transatlantic community and the transatlantic partnership are in crisis. In some cases various approaches of the USA and EU to settlement of international problems are really obvious. Also the factors posing a threat for the transatlantic relations are obvious.
In the master's dissertation the role of the USA and NATO is defined in modern foreign policy activity of the EU, the interests of the EU and the USA come to light within the framework of the transatlantic community, the forecast and the prospects of relationship of "USA-EU-Russia" are built up an assessment of further development of NATO and degree of an involvement of the USA is given in the European affairs with arrival of administration of Donald Trump to the USA.
The first chapter describes the history of the development of the general foreign policy of the European Union, the process of forming its institutional unity, a unified European voice in the second half of the 20th century is described, and also at the present stage.
The second chapter examines the interests of the EU and the US within the transatlantic community, their coincidence and divergence. Special attention is paid to the factor of NATO and the influence of the alliance policy on the activities of the European Union.
The third chapter is devoted to the role of the USA in formation of a foreign policy course of the European Union. Separately considered the American factor In building relations between the EU and Russia. The options for the development of tripartite relations are described. Also, the chapter examines the prospects for USA-EU relations in connection with the arrival of the new administration in the White House.
Keywords: the European Union, the foreign policy of the European Union, NATO, The Common Foreign and Security Policy (CFSP), the general policy of the alliance, the tripartite relations of the USA-EU-Russia, the crisis of Atlantic relations.

 crockodile

link 22.05.2017 13:32 
имхо:

are continue?
are built up an assessment ???
degree of an involvement?
arrival of administration - куда и откуда вся администрация совершает arrival?
и т.д. и т.п. дальше надоело.

по содержанию: ничего нового (хотя вроде научная работа должна на какую-то оригинальность претендовать, если не мединский)

по форме - выглядит как будто старательно и адски неуклюже.

 Petrelnik

link 22.05.2017 13:40 
Кто читать-то будет?
Если американцы, то они сильно поржут от такого.
Если это перевод "шоб было" - ну и оставьте как есть, какая разница-то.

 Rengo

link 22.05.2017 13:41 
Сrokodile: а что такое "deals with to the foreign policy"
и нестарательно, и неуклюже, и слишком много артиклей.

 crockodile

link 22.05.2017 13:54 
Rengo, с чего бы мне быть адресатом вопросов по этому опусу?

"нестарательно" было бы написать "nato sucks, eu/usa #ucked up, putin rulezzz"

а тут наваян такой кирпич, что знаки с клавы стерлись, наверное, пока писано. явно старался чел, идиомы гуглил, только связки между ними не прогуглишь, увы.

 

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