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Subject: Электронное письмо gen. Нужно написать клиенту письмо. Не уверена в правильности написанного. Подскажите, как можно улучшить текст. Заранее спасибо.We regret to inform you that the payment for using our website has not been arranged. To have full access to the website, please, make sure you have paid for provided services. Thank you for your understanding. We value your custom highly. |
| а последнее это что? мы чтим ваши обычаи?!) |
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link 19.08.2016 12:54 |
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the payment for using our website has not been arranged. = we haven't received your payment for using our website paid for provided services. = paid for THE provided services. "We value your custom highly." - убрать. |
| Для нас очень важно сотрудничество с вами. |
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link 19.08.2016 12:55 |
| AVLS, может и чтут. щас время такое.... обычаи.... то-сё... |
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link 19.08.2016 12:55 |
| Для нас очень важно сотрудничество с вами. = we appreciate your cooperation. |
| спасибо огромное за помощь! |
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link 19.08.2016 13:02 |
| тройка с плюсом. плюс за то что пятница. |
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Еще часто говорят (по поводу сотрудничества, если это говорится клиенту): Thank you for being our [valued] customer. We appreciate you being our customer. |
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link 19.08.2016 13:19 |
| yes it is. |
| (NB: первое - обычно thank you message, вряд ли здесь подойдет). |
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link 19.08.2016 13:23 |
| штё? |
| 16:06 - первое предложение (Новый год, Thanksgiving, все такое). |
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link 19.08.2016 13:27 |
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'please, make sure' => 'please make sure' 'paid for provided services' => 'paid for the services provided' |
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link 19.08.2016 13:31 |
| those bloody deverbative adjectives and punctuation )) |
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link 19.08.2016 13:37 |
| Behave yourself. :-) |
| Say 'blooming' instead of the other b-word. |
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link 19.08.2016 13:45 |
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did i say "deverbative adjectives and punctuation"?.... i'm terribly sorry, this won't ever happen again. |
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link 19.08.2016 14:05 |
| Anyway, it's a past passive participle, not an adjective.... |
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link 19.08.2016 14:13 |
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trtrtr: At school we were told not to say 'bloody'. If we did we'd probably have got the cane. So a lot of adults said 'ruddy' instead, as a euphemism. And the f-word was definitely verboten. Now everybody says 'bloody' AND the f-word, even on TV (after 9pm), and 'ruddy' is considered so weak that no-one uses it. Standards ain't wot they used to be.... |
| Interesting, thank you. |
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link 19.08.2016 14:21 |
| "it's a past passive participle, not an adjective" - i apologized |
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link 19.08.2016 14:39 |
| 'apologize' -- present tense. ;-) |
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link 19.08.2016 14:43 |
| i meant i had already said "sorry" at 16:45. |
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link 19.08.2016 14:58 |
| the present is so tense... |
| the past, the present and the future walked into a bar. it was tense. |
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link 19.08.2016 18:10 |
| Hah! I always feel tense whenever crockodile asks a question! |
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