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 pishkin182

link 7.04.2014 7:41 
Subject: Проверьте, пожалуйста, небольшой текст. gen.
Our country, at that moment Ukraine, was in a difficult economic situation and huge unemployment. My son had received a job offer in Belgium, we were very happy, but as it turned out that job was criminal one.
Yes, my son is very guilty, but I beg for your mercy. I’m 62 years old, I have withstand carcinectomy surgery. I believe very strongly that you will hear my pray for mercy of my son.
My son have two daughters, they are 9 and 3 years old, and they are growing up without father.
I beg you to be merciful to hear mother’s tears and prayers for her son release. Hope for your kindly heart and goodness and hope that I could alive to see my son.

 Karabas

link 7.04.2014 8:49 
Для проверки очень не помешал бы текст оригинала.

 Aiduza

link 7.04.2014 9:02 
Надо переделывать, а то звучит как письмо из Нигерии.

 Rami88

link 7.04.2014 9:04 
I have withstand
My son have
kindly heart
I could alive

Сразу мимо.
Остальное тоже на уровне рунглиша.
Боюсь, даже оригинал не спасёт.

 Rami88

link 7.04.2014 9:05 
Aiduza, звучит как письмо из России. В Найджирии всё-таки английский является официальным языком, как-никак.

 

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