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 pishkin182

link 10.09.2013 18:09 
Subject: Помогите пожалуйста пожалуйста gen.
Можно так написать? Очень очень надо. Срочно.

Andrey lives in our house since 1990, since he was a schoolboy. After graduation, Andrey entered a vocational school, then served in the army, after that he entered and graduated from the Lviv state University.
We know Andrey as a kind, merry, smiling guy. He lives in the apartment with parents, wife and children. Andrey good and careful family-man, adore children, he had two daughters. Always helps at home, walking with his daughters. For some time past his family had difficulty because the wife being in maternity leave on childcare, don't work, and Andrey could not find a job.

 muzungu

link 10.09.2013 18:16 
Написать можно - бумага терпит. Исправлять охоты нет, т.к. слишком много ошибок.

 Ana_net

link 10.09.2013 18:17 
на первый взгляд-
adore=adores
careful=caring
don't =doesn't
could not find a job. = has difficulty in finding a job

 pishkin182

link 10.09.2013 18:19 
Спасибо, добрый человек muzungu, очень помог.

 Ana_net

link 10.09.2013 18:21 
Lviv state University = Lviv University or Ivan Franko National
University of Lviv

 pishkin182

link 10.09.2013 18:25 
Ana_net, спасибо большое!!!

 AMOR 69

link 10.09.2013 18:32 
house - подозреваю, это building
army - military
Andrey is a good and careful family-man, adores his children. He has two daughters.
Always helps at home, walking with his daughters. - нет подлежащего
some time past his family had difficulty - in the past his family had financial problems
because the wife being - wife was
don't work - did not work

 pishkin182

link 10.09.2013 18:46 
AMOR 69, спасибо!

 натрикс

link 10.09.2013 18:51 
ну, мои пять копеек, чо)
Andrey lives has been living in our house since 1990

 muzungu

link 10.09.2013 19:31 
has been living in our house since 1990, when he was a schoolboy

 

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