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 Meir

link 10.06.2013 3:25 
Subject: Need ur opinion, tnx gen.
Hey guys, can you pls look at this and express ur opinion?

The issue of standardized tests has been controversial because nowadays, there are many complaints related to standardized tests. Most of these complaints say that standardized tests are not fully discovering students’ knowledge potential, which seems to hurt the students when they fail. Some argue that standardized tests aren’t being used enough.They argue that standardized tests should not only be used to place students into classes, but also should require standardized tests between levels of classes.

 smartasset

link 10.06.2013 3:43 
opinion about what exactly?

 CopperKettle

link 10.06.2013 3:48 
They argue that standardized tests should not only be used to place students into classes, but also should require standardized tests between levels of classes.

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They argue that standardized tests should not only be used to place students into classes, but also be taken as students transition between class levels. (as students pass from one class level to another).

(otherwise it seems that "tests ... require ... tests", IMHO )

 lisulya

link 10.06.2013 3:49 
а где исходник-то?

 Meir

link 10.06.2013 6:21 
This is my essay for English class. I just want to make sure that my essay is grammatically correct. Thanks

 lisulya

link 10.06.2013 14:19 
Грамматические вроде все правильно, но есть некоторые шероховатости

Nowadays -- можно вобще выбросить

Most of these complaints say that --> most of these complaints state that

are not fully discovering students’ knowledge potential -- грамматически все верно, но по сути по-моему не очень. Тесты не призваны раскрывать потенциал, для этого есть другие методы. Можно заменить на standardized testing discourages from discovering...

ну и CopperKettle + 1

Выражение "standardized tests" употреблено шесть (!) раз в этом маленьком отрывке. Замените на что-то другое: such tests, testing, they, etc

 irip

link 10.06.2013 14:46 
standardized tests в каждом предложении
может стоит разнообразить - these/such tests, they...

 LexeyB

link 10.06.2013 20:12 
Там местоимений без того достаточно. В английском языке подобные повторения - это норма.

 lisulya

link 10.06.2013 20:50 
Это норма для технических документов, но не для сочинения

 

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