Наша компания представит на выставке новые решения в области мобильных технологий, для банков, мобильных операторов, поставщиков услуг (торгово-сервисных предприятий), страховых компаний, пенсионных фондов, ПИФов. Будут представлены запущенные версии наших продуктов в различных банках.

Мы будем рады увидеть Вас в числе наших гостей и надеемся, что посещение этого мероприятия окажется для Вас всесторонне полезным.

Перевод:
Intervale-Kazakhstan is pleased to extend to You this invitation to attend the 17th International Central Asian Exhibition of Telecommunication, Computer and Informational Technologies “KITEL 2010” (http://www.kitel.kz), which will take place on May 25-27th, 2010 in International Business Center “Atakent”, Almaty, Kazakhstan. The Intervale-Kazakhstan Company’s stand number – K08.
Our Company shall exhibit innovations in a field of mobile technologies for banks, mobile operators, service providers (retailer and service outlets), insurance companies, pension funds, mutual funds. Launched versions of our products in different banks shall also be on display.
Our Company shall exhibit innovations in a field of mobile technologies for banks, mobile operators, service providers (retailer and service outlets), insurance companies, pension funds, mutual funds. Launched versions of our products in different banks shall also be on display.
We will be glad to see You among our guests and we hope that attending this event will turns out to You as beneficial in every aspect.

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is pleased to extend to You this invitation to attend the - is pleased to invite you to attened....

Our Company shall exhibit - At the exhibition our company will present
pension funds - retirement funds
shall also be on display - will be displayed

*we hope that attending this event will turns out to You as beneficial in every aspect.*
as what?

we hope this event will be beneficial to you in every aspect

Intervale-Kazakhstan Company will be at stand number K08.

Our Company will exhibit innovations in mobile technologies for banks, mobile operators, service providers (retailer and service outlets), insurance companies, pension funds, and mutual funds.

Launched versions of our products used by different banks will also be on display.

We look forward to seeing you there and hope that attending this event will prove beneficial for you.

Launched versions of our products used by different banks will also be on display.

We look forward to seeing you there and hope that attending this event will prove beneficial for you.