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 zacharovana

link 19.05.2010 13:28 
Subject: перевод сайта
Здравствуйте!

Пожалуйста, оцените перевод сайта на английский язык. Буду очень благодарна за комментарии, поскольку мне сказали, что перевод похож на автоперевод.
Спасибо заранее!

http://interplat.com.ua/

INTERPLAT

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Interplat Internet payments are intended for quick and efficient non-cash payments for goods and services via Internet by means of NSMEP smart-cards (NSMEP – National system of mass electronic payments). System of Internet payments allows in real time to pay for mobile connection vouchers, public services, services of “Ukrtelecom”, cable, digital television and Internet “Volia-Cable”, television NTV+, IP-telephony, to conduct money transfers via Internet of “Ukrposhta” and etc. At the site you have a possibility immediately to check the account situation and card balance. All payments in the system are characterized by high reliability and security due to use of payment smart-cards under technology developed by National Bank of Ukraine.

News

16.04.2010

LLC Interplat participated in XI International conference “Internet-business 2010”

XI International conference “Internet-Business 2010” took place on 16 April 2010 in Kyiv within the framework of XIV international exhibition elcomUkraine 2010. Director of bank payment system department spoke on behalf of LLC…. More

15.05.2009

Payment of bills via Internet – new service of system “Interplat”

System “Interplat” together with joint-stock commercial bank “Imexbank” offer new service for the owners of NSMEP cards – henceforward by means of “Interplat” it is possible to conduct the payment of bills via Internet. More

29.04.2009

New version of client part of Internet-terminal is available for download

It is already available a new version of client part of Internet-terminal. To download it, move to page necessary for client.

23.02.2009

New Internet-terminal “InterTermII” with function of money transfer obtained NBU certification

On 5 February 2009 LLC “Unisystem” obtained the certificate of National Bank of Ukraine on certification and functional qualification of Internet-terminal …. More

24.11.2008

LLC “Unisystem” participated in the conference “National system of mass electronic payments. Brand-new technologies for realization of state and corporate programs and projects”

Конференція на тему: «Національна система масових електронних платежів. Новітні технології для реалізації державних і корпоративних програм та проектів» відбулася 23-24 жовтня 2008 року в Розрахункові... Детальніше >>

Conference on the subject: “National system of mass electronic payments. Brand-new technologies for realization of state and corporate programs and projects” took place on 23-24 October 2008 …… More

10.06.2008

LLC “Unisystem” participated in the conference “Development of electronic business of Ukraine in the scope of single society”

Conference on the subject: “Development of electronic business of Ukraine in the scope of single society” took place on 10 June 2008 in the congress-hall of President Hotel in Kyiv. …. More

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 dozaikin

link 19.05.2010 13:34 
что значит похож... А разве это не есть самый что ни на есть автоперевод. У меня ребёнок в 3 классе лучше переведёт, я думаю.

 DpoH

link 19.05.2010 13:38 
+1
Ответить = Answer))

 SwetikS

link 19.05.2010 13:41 
+2
statistics site особенно понравилось))

 Анна Ф

link 19.05.2010 14:06 
Вы знаете, крутить такой длинный текст в "Мультитране" не очень удобно. Давайте я его скопирую в Word, гляну и вышлю вам с поправками на ваш мейл, который у вас в профиле указан. Может, какие-то ошибки, которые прямо сразу же и видны, отмечу. А дальше либо сами поправляйте, либо кто-то из коллег что-то порекомендует. Вижу, артиклей не хватает и еще кое-какие моменты. У меня есть 5-10 минут, сейчас, пришлю. Просто свои пожелания.

 zacharovana

link 19.05.2010 14:14 
Анна, спасибо Вам большое!
Я понимаю, что мне еще учиться и учиться, просто взялась сделать этот тест, и эта тематика для меня новая, поэтому я хотела услышать конструктивную критику.
Искренне благодарна Вам за человеческое отношение.

 sledopyt

link 19.05.2010 14:20 
consider:

QUICK AND SAFE INTERNET PAYMENTS

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If you visit the site for the first time

Interplat Internet payments are intended for quick and efficient non-cash ONLINE payments for goods and services via Internet by means of USING NSMEP smart-cards (smart cards -- two words) (NSMEP – National sSystem of mMass eElectronic pPayments). THE System of Internet ONLINE payments allows MAKING REAL-TIME ONLINE PAYMENTS in real time to pay for mobile connection vouchers?? SERVICES (?), public services AND services of “Ukrtelecom” (no quoutes), cable, digital television and Internet “Volia-Cable” PROVIDERS, AS WELL AS television NTV+, IP-telephony, to conduct money transfers via Internet of “Ukrposhta” and etc. (the sentence is too long, need to restructure). At ON the site, you have a possibility CAN immediately to QUICKLY check ACCESS?? the account situation and CHECK YOUR card balance. All payments in the system are characterized by high reliability and security due to use of payment smart-cards under technology developed by National Bank of Ukraine. THE SMART CARD TECHNOLOGY DEVELOPED BY ... IS RELIABLE AND GUARANTEES THE HIGHEST LEVEL OF SECURITY FOR YOUR PAYMENTS.

 Анна Ф

link 19.05.2010 14:22 
Я вам выслала, просто глянула одним глазком, посмотрите.
А всем учиться и учиться :) Там есть поправочки, конечно, но, может быть, еще кто-то что-то посоветует, у кого сейчас время есть.

 Baxter

link 19.05.2010 14:28 
sledopyt wrote:

THE System of Internet ONLINE payments allows MAKING REAL-TIME ONLINE PAYMENTS in real time to pay for mobile connection vouchers?? SERVICES (?),

TOP UP YOUR MOBILE??

you have a possibility CAN immediately to QUICKLY check ACCESS?? the account situation

VIEW YOUR ACCOUNT (STATUS)???

 

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