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link 25.10.2009 17:15 |
Subject: заметка об нло поправте пожалуйста заметку так чтобы она лучше смотрелась для глаза англоязычного читателя ,заранее благодаренUFO BOOM IN KAZAKHSTAN This summer in the West Kаzakhstan was a real UFO boom. Two UFO objects felt literally on the local farm as two big glary balls sparking with red green and yellow. |
50 sm - это сантиметры? cm |
в аббревиатуре UFO уже есть object. should be two UFOs. вызывает большие сомнения слово polygon. и не только. |
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link 26.10.2009 0:59 |
upahill +1 polygon нейтивы поймут, прежде всего, как "многоугольник" А что такое Hover Emergency Situation Agency даже я (нейтив рашен спикер) не понял. Догадываюсь, что это казахстанское МЧС, но при чем тут hover? |
THERE WAS A REAL BOOM IN UFOS this summer in After they had cooled villagers without fear of sky-born technology tried to hit them with metal tools but unknown material they were made from was without any scratch and only sparkled when being hit... ....Oy vey... I won't even try. :)) This was a rare case of falling detached parts of apparatus in this area because there are no polygons nearby Polygons? :)) Вы хоть словарем пользуетесь, а? :)))) |
my two cents: in the West Kаzakhstan --> in WestERN Kаzakhstan OR in the West of Kazakhstan was a real UFO boom --> experienced a UFO boom Two silver balls diameter about 60 sm --> Two silver balls, each 60 cm in diameter agency declared --> according to ... Agency, ... danger for people of toxic or radiation threat --> choose what you like better: "danger" or "threat" and use accordingly. E.g., ... radiation contamination threat OR danger of radiation contamination. "polygon" is a very bold move! и повторите неправильные глаголы... |
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